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Alone
as always
thinking back
to what was
what might have been
and now I see
what was once unseen

Awake
can't sleep
left to dwell in emotions deep
what was reality
soon becomes
a lost fantasy

Sleep, Only to be woken
Run, Only to be caught
Scream, Only to be unheard
Escape to the darkness
Into the unknown

Love
Once experienced
Now gone
What was to be
No longer will
All is lost
In spite of me

Alone
As always
Thinking back
To what was
What might have been
But now I see
What once was unseen

Sleep to be woken
Run to be caught
Scream to be unheard
Escape to the darkness
Into the unknown
Only to emerge in the light
To start again
Reborn
First attempt.. Dedicated to the one who inspired it, you know who you are.
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spva91 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
wow great poem. Very sad but with a touch of hope at the end. Amazing!
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Labbonno Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Professional Writer
great job done.:heart:
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MeDaisy Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow very nice
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evilkevil Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010
thats awesome
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smeelkin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
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LongLove Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
wonderful!! Truly moved me!!
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FancyOrchid Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
i love your last verse
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ashley-monster Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2010   Photographer
That's beautiful. <3
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RosaEnora Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Student Writer
i have been through all that you have written. and im guessing you have too. but the last part has failed to grace me with its presence. I am still stuck in the darkness. still looking for the light. i hope that you have found the light and have been reborn to a better life. :)
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SkyeSweetBaby Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
thats an amazing poem!you should become a poet
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